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In defense of creativity, the good kind, the well-thought style, the pain-inducing, love-emitting, emotionally charged and occasionally witty. Or something like it.

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  • Day 20 of 30: Shhh, We’re Indians.

    I had never been in such darkness before. The sky had almost no stars, and the moon was hazy. Yet Pete, with his inch-thick lenses, bounded like a rabbit across the courtyard.

    “Come on,” he whispered as loud as he could.

    Extending my arms out like antenna, I did my best to walk the field without tripping. I reached the camp fire pit and took a second to refocus my feeble night vision. Then I heard metal scraping in the distance. Metal on dirt.

    “What the hell are you doing?” I whispered.

    “What are you doing?” he responded, “Come on.”

    By the time I reached him, Pete had rolled a canoe over and pushed it down to the river.

    “I thought we were checking out the counselors,” I said with hushed urgency.

    “We are. But we can only get there this way.” And he pushed the canoe into the water, holding it for me. “Get in.”

    I climbed in and stepped to the front, looking around for the essentials. “Where’s the oar?”

    “Shoot. I forgot.” And Pete darted off to the shed. “Shoot, shoot.” The water moved about the canoe, and I noticed the shore curling away from view.

    “Pete!”

    But he was too late in returning.

    “Wait,” he shrieked.

    “I can’t.”

    Then I knew getting to the counselors was going to be good, because in a rush of adrenaline Pete leaped into the water. The splashing was loud as lions, but he reached the canoe and climbed in, his hands still clutching the oars.

    I grinned, “That was awesome.”

    “Shhh,” he whispered, stone-faced and solemn, “we’re Indians.” 

    Tagged: flash fiction 30daysofcreativity

    Posted on June 22, 2010

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